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by tookish_girl (tookish_girl)
at November 11th, 2006 (09:09 am)
discontent

current location: MY FRIEND STACEY'S house
current mood: discontent
current song: james bond

ok here is the last few paragraphs of the 2nd chapter that i didn't get done the other night because people at my house were expecting a phone call.

----------rewind to the scene in the forest: John's POV---------------

John set down his ax for a moment to wipe his brow. 'I've really gotta get a new chain for the chainsaw.' he was thinking to himself when something caught his attention. There in the distance, about fifty yards away, was a person hauling ass, darting through the trees like a bat out of hell, dragging a basket. John recognized the red hoodie and decided to investigate.

As he followed Red's trail through the woods, he too noticed how silent the surroundings had become. John was glad he at least had the ax to defend himself with if he happened across the Big Bad Wraith.

'Shit, I bet that's what Red was runnin' from,' he realized, and became twice as cautious. 'That goofy red hoodie he wears is like a bullseye for that wraith.'

Picking up his pace, John began to recognize the path. 'He must be on his way to Old Lady Emmogan's house.' he reasoned. Red was her grandson after all. Everybody knew everybody else in this area. Then he recalled his online friend RedGenius, telling him he had to go check on his grandmother...'No way they're the same person.' John(Flyboy!) tried to tell himself.

end of chapter 2
dun dun DUN!